Here you can see a story being revealed and an attempt to add music and editing to portray this. For the coming together of a 2nd edit I think this works yet there are many improvements we need to work on.
- Sound, background sound (wind) is controlling the dialogue, making it hard to understand what the character is saying. This needs to be detached and removed, and we will need to rerecord just the sound and sync this to the clip itself.
- Clips tend to last on screen too long, for example, the beginning clips which capture the urban environment appear on screen for too long and the audience is ‘waiting’ as there is no tension or sense of enigma.
- Sound is not synced accurately, does not appear with visuals.s
- Some of the clips are unnecessary and do not help portray story, themes or emotional hook. Therefore we will remove them.
- Music and editing needs to be improved in order to create anticipation.
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